Homestuck Girls in summer attire (minus aradia)

Hello yes no its critique time! Overall this is a really cute picture. I really like the art style you used and your coloring is great! I like the colors you used on each girl, and i love how the colors mostly match up to the color of their regular clothes. There are a couple things that seem a little off to me, though. I personally think the way vriska's shirt is pulled down seems a little awkward, and it might look better pulled down on her other arm. I'm also not sure if she would be one to wear bracelets, but I think that looks nice though. I absolutely love the way you drew terezi's hair uwu I think terezi's outfit suits her very well and I can see her wearing that. I also like how she's wearing longer shorts because it seems more like something she'd wear. I'm kind of confused about nepeta's sunglasses though. They look like they have a little white outline and I find that kind of distracting, whether intentional or not. I also think her hair should have been a bit messier because every time in canon that her hat was off her hair was messy. again thats just what I would do but that's definatly the artist's choice. i think kanaya is perfect, except that her pose is very similar to nepeta's. i think her pose is fine with her arms but i think her legs might look better more straight, like vriska. feferi is probably my favorite design out of the five, considering the creativity put into the outfit. I think its really cool that her shirt pattern is her regular outfit's skirt design. i also really like the color used for her shoes. You definitly show that you have a lot of talent and it looks like you put a lot of time into this :3 great job!